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A ROLLING SENTENCE. AN EXAMPLE – day 7

FIVE DAYS IN MARCH

DAY 7

“A natural born molester of the innards, he relishes getting his creepy little fingers straight into the belly, that which should be the private space of all creatures, he invades, laughing all the while, like the devil he chose to be, sucking up the blood with his thirsty, vengeful eyes.”

Rolling sentences usually happen by accident, and we writers usually go back and fix them. You don’t have to if the communication works.

~ Sharon Lee Davies-Tight






 

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